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| "Beware the Broken" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: POOT
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 04:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
im oficially dead, i swear to god, all u guys have just died on this bloody website or something! where the heck are you people! forget about ur lives i say!!!!! sniff pwease update. once i get hooked on a story i get obsessed! OBSESSED I TELL YOU! its going to haunt me for the rest of my life!!! because thats how lame i am.
| Reviewed By: STINZA On: January 20, 2008 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you think nick is boring? oh wow no way! hes the character i feel the most sympathetic for and the one who captured my attention straight away, sniff i love nick! put heaps of nick in!!! heaps heaps heaps! im really interested how his -brother doing wat he did to him--will break him. I wana see his slow spiral downhill!!! muwhahahah but yeah really i do, it makes me like the characters more when they have all that extra baggage happening. Im not a big fan of darren, but thats just probly because im obsessed with nick, i would be quite happy if u ended the story with nick shooting him.hehe.:) As always ur writing style is fantastic, its so good to read a well written story unlike some of that really bad style of writing you can get on here.i dont really have any bad critiscism to give, im not to great at that, and everything is great in this story like ur others. Except put more Nick in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pretty please.
| Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
your killing me!!!!!!!!! killing meeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i know uhave a life and u must be busy, but please update soon! i think im going die from waiting!!!!!!!!! ok maybe not die but something as dramatic as that!
| Title: great
Reviewed By: nutty_youare [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
at first i didnt really enjoy it, but now i really like the character of nick, ur build up on character development is really good, so i cant help but feel emotions for ur characters. i hope u still continue this story, i think ur a great writer.nice work
| Title: Ooh.
Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. I\'m a sucker for Yaoi, and I enjoyed reading the story so far. Im also envious of how you are able to write smut. I somehow find ways of avoiding it, so good on you!! I can\'t wait to see what\'s next. :3
| Reviewed By: ImmortalDecay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha....this is dill if u havent guessed already. XD well, there ar emany grammer errors as u said, but that doesnt take any enjoyment out of the story for me =] no one ever had this idea, so its quite creative. as Mr. Messenhiemer would say.... YOU ARE A SHEEP! =] it was quite enjoyable and funny. ur getting me interested in this whole yaoi thing...XD
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