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| "The Raven Colored Fox" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: lonelychild On: December 21, 2007 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story rocks! i love the way you make the characters like themselves but make them fit into the story, your stile(which i love by the way), their roles and the time periods. i love the whole idea you had with kagome being an artist. i enjoed reading it. YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!! you did great but you need to work a litte more on your spelling and grammar (though i shouldnt talk- i have horrible spelling and grammar) i look forward to reading your next story! ja ne and good luck!!! ;)
| Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story! Its just so cute!!! I how you described the picture! The one with the white puppy and the fox. Just so cute!!! By the way you sure made Kagome funny when shes drunk! I also love the end " you think that you molested me!!!" I almost died of laughter!!!!! It was so funny!!! Anyway again loved the story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! keep up the good work!
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