"Dragonfly" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 23:00 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Well done so far. I have to admit, this one is turning out better than the other one; it's more dramatic and serious with a plot that (so far) seems to be interesting, intriguing and deep. The pilots feel more human, too. Before, it was all kinda cartoony *grin* I also like that there's not such a big age gap between them all as there was previously. It makes them seem like they relate to each other better. I look forward to seeing where you take this one.
| Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 14:21 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please write more. I would love to read more of this fic. It is really, really good.
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