Reviewed By:a friggin dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 08:54 CDT Comment/Review: its a really good story so far but please watch your grammer and spelling, do you have anyone to beta it? i think your story would impove greatly in that aspect. but so far so good^^ cant wait to read more!
Reviewed By: Scythe chan On: September 16, 2007 11:35 CDT Comment/Review: very nice start would love to see more!