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| "InuYasha: Legend of the Record Keeper" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: deeds [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 20:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't review often, but to encourage you in this & future endeavors i will comply with your need for affirmation. do you have a beta, or DID? this is not flame, i just happen to be channeling seshey. seriously, good story, i hope you continue to write, i like your style.
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 19:20 CST
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Love this chapter! Happy you are back, so... a second part? Good. But first must get to the end of this one!! Thanks for the update but don't rush, there are a lot of things to tie up but like a lot where -I think- you are going! Keep it coming and thanks for sharing! Happy New Year!!
| Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: December 05, 2007 14:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, but I like Sesshomaru's softer side. Keep writing please!
| Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: November 25, 2007 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update! I really enjoyed it and I love the fact that Sesshomaru has feelings other than death and destruction. I also like the fact that Kohaku has a crush on Rin. It makes for an interesting twist I think.
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 17:28 CST
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Love this filling chapter! Although a filler is was a good one, good to know a bit more about our not so mysterious lady. Good to know that you are continuing it, and good to know that your spirit is up too. That's the way! Remember always... You are writing this story because it's your joy. Go girl! Keep going and thanks for the update!!!!
| Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: November 12, 2007 19:26 CST
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I really am enjoying your story. Please keep writing it and update it as soon as possible!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 20:52 CST
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Loved this chapter! Loved the pace of it. Finally, finally both couples had their moment, bothe of recognition -on different stage, tho. I'm terribly sad that you are going to put this "on hold", it's a pity. The lack of reviews should not dim your story, sometimes it happens at first. When the writer is new, and on MM we have this sort of "short" response concerning reviews. Maybe you should post it on FFnet too, if you are not there already. But, don't give up, never. This is your story tho, but -IMHO- you should not give up. Reviews will come and, if they don't... maybe on your next story. Don't give up, it's a long hard path to cover but it's worthwhile. It's a pity, I'm surely going to miss it but, it's your choice. I'm still going to wait for new things to come and, hopefully new chapters on this one too. Be brave, don't lose hope!!!!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 23:41 CDT
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Okay, must say... bad timing Grandpa!!! Arrrghhh... no kiss, nothing. And that black necklace... is she going to destroy it or is she going to use it with Naraku? Mmmm... should wait. And what is going with Kusabana? Did she leave everything behind? The old lady... is Kaede??? It would be nice... Keep going and thank you for sharing with us!!!
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 18:39 CDT
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Nice chapter! Although, must say, it's Sango and not Songo. Loved Rin and Kusabana's moment in dreamland! I still cannot figure out how are you going to manage the situation between Kusabana and Sesshomaru with all the restrictions she has, but think it's going to be a nice reading-adventure to go through. Keeping going and thank you for sharing with us! :)
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 20:09 CDT
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Love the story!!! Interesting and different, would love to see her interacting with Sesshomaru. Keep going and thx f/sharing with us!
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