| "The Fox and Boar" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: this fic was amazing
Reviewed By: Desgardia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was a damn good fic i loved it please write more cuz it jst blew me away and it brought tears to my eyes a few times (its reli hard 2 do that cuz i am a guy) so plz write more plz plz plzzzz
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Title: Me again lol
Reviewed By: sinnerboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey its me again lol.. i like the new update.. i think you should defiantly put somemore action scenes into the story.. once again i bring up when are you gonna get ino and naruto actually involved with eachother ( i mean dating, not screwing..)
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Reviewed By: Soliderboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
go naruto kickin ass and takeing names update soon
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Title: Action scene
Reviewed By: Little Ant [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello again, finally updated I've seen ;) I'm only rating chapter 6 now, so don't be confused, because of the last rating I gave. It was fun to read the fighting scene, though you ended up with some kills happening without us knowing it, or without saying any special things about these kills. Maybe you should decrease the number of foes, that would make it easier I guess. My question is if you have a beta, because I read some parts of the chapter and ended up with some words missing(English isn't my native language so I may just don't know the grammar, or that you can write it that way).Anyway I like the story, although I think you made Inoichi far too weak I think he would be at least equal to Naruto(the fact of Naruto having more stamina doesn't count, because Inoichi ate a soldier pill), continue the good work and please please update soon, I want to find out what happens next.
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Title: Good Story :P
Reviewed By: sinnerboy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a damn good story.. i hate sakura/naruto crossing so i love the fact that you decided to do an Ino/Naruto crossing.. you have a damn good plot and story line going.. Umm i kinda wish that you would already hook Ino and Naruto up though.. good story and i hope that you update very very soon :P.. P.S. could you email me when you finally do update thx
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 15:57 CST
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Those two chapter were really good ok I have a question and that is I might have misunderstood did you say there are now 3 Uchiha`s out there Itachi,Sasgay and now somebody else oh well please update soon and please don`t take forever like last time
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 09:27 CDT
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I really like this story because I like reading rare pairring like Naruto/Ino hell I don`t really like Sakura hell she doesn`t like the idea of Naruto an Ino because if he is with Ino then that means he isn`t paying attention to her she doesn`t give a damn about Naruto until now she see`s he likes Ino oh well please update soon please
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Title: Worst thing ever?
Reviewed By: w4sp On: September 12, 2007 06:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't be fooled by the review title. This is probably one of the most well written fics I've read up to now (Including those I read on FFnet). Your style of writing deserves a 10, use of figures of style, even if you didn't do it on purpose, Good flow, good descriptions. Spelling and grammar is a 9, only because I can't put 9.9, and that's because no one makes 0 mistakes. Enjoyment factor is 10 because It was very fun for its shortness. Overall, it's a 10. Keep up the good work. and Hinthint: This could go on for more than 4-5 chapters ^^, Actually, it has the start of an epic length fanfic. -w4sp
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Title: Good work
Reviewed By: Little Ant [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story! You let them slowly build up a relation, I like that style, it seems more realistic to me, than some other storys I read so far.I truly never thought up the paring, but after I read your story I quite like the pairing Good work, can't wait the next chapter. (I haven't rated Spelling/Gramar, cus I suck at it...)
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Title: the fox and boar
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: September 10, 2007 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is good keep up the good work.
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Title: the fox and boar
Reviewed By: blue wolf On: September 08, 2007 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read your stroy it was great. please contunie with this story. i think that ino and naruto make a great pair. i have read a few stories with the same thing it is good to have someone see it in a different light depiste what others see and say. it good to have someine by your side. i hope that is ino will do for naruto. keep up the goood work. i can not wait to read more of this story.
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