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| "Colour Me Yours" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Excellent Writing!
Reviewed By: hauduck [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 18:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Even though the content in this story was heavy on the S & M side, something I'm usually not very comfortable with for long periods, I found myself unable to pull away from it. You really captured what it means to be empty and devoid of emotion and what it means to "long" and struggle for fulfillment. You took me on a tragically poetic "journey" and I do thank you for it. Keep up the great work. ^___~
| Reviewed By: Sakiku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 03:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. It's such a pity that I'm the first one to review this excellent story. Your excellent work deserves much more feedback. I love it how you manage to portray his desperation, his incredible need, and yet stay somewhat distanced, too. It is a very interesting perspective - the 'you' more or less begs me to understand, much more personal than 'he', but not as in control as 'I'. I think, although it should be classified as a PWP, it is more along the lines of art. Thank you very much. Sakiku
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