| "The Amnesia Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE !
UPDATE SOON ! |
Reviewed By: andres ocasio On: August 11, 2002 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is great upload the next chapter quikly i can't wait |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo... you need to finish this soon! I'm really enjoying it. Goku and Bulma together doesn't bother me that much, but I really want to see them back with their proper mates. :)
Oh, and the only reason I gave you a lower score on the writing was that you seem to have a problem with changing tenses (present to past) in paragraphs or even the same sentence. Personally, I like to read and write in past tense... it seems to be easier. |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story
PLZ ! update SOOON
thanx : ) |
