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Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very intresting! great job.... i hope kagome lives! keep up the great work! update soon! please and thank you! p.s. spelling and grammer should be a 9 1/2 but i can tdo that so i did 9.it really deserves a 9 1/2 though!
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this is so sad...i really like the uniqueness of the storyline...cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 12:41 CDT
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an obsessive and delusional, wow and sadly, i can see it in the canon. . . one would think that kouga would be that way but somehow i get the feeling he would take the let down much better. . . the drama, the angst was described very eloquently, only a few mistakes in word usage/grammar but only detracted slightly from the very 'real' feel of the story. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 10:13 CDT
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Very good so far. only the odd speeling error like using the word 'two' for 'too' The fact that you have Kagome's 'friends' as part of the major cause why Kagome is in the hospital as the two ring leaders never bother to consider Kagome's and Hojo's feelings and the possiblity of Hojo being like this (if he were real)is scary! I do like how you took this serious subject and made it into a realistic story. Nothing I read made light of the subject. Kafome will mostly like be laid up for quite a while but with that stubborn mind set and the burning passion she has, I am hoping she won't die. Inuyasha will be even more stubborn and possibly aggressive about her going anywhere without him in the future. I really do hope Mama Higurashi finds out about her 'friends' major part in the condition of two people and gives them a big piece of her mind. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 09:46 CDT
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omg. i can't believe it. school-shootings are a very serious matter, but i think it makes a good plot for this story. i can't wait to see how inuyasha acts towards kagome now that this has happened. i'm sure the relationship between them could get a lot more serious now that he's come so close to losing her. yeah, she could still die at the hospital, but i think she's to strong-willed, & wouldn't die that easily, especially if she'd never see inuyasha again. if/when she does get better, i wonder how much of an argument they'll get it over her going back to her own time. inuyasha was so stubborn about it before. now that he relizes that her time isn't as safe as he thought, he could use that as an excuse for keeping her in his time. but these are all just guesses on what i think can happen. i can't wait to see what you really do with it. you've done an awesome job so far. keep up the good work, & please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lord, that's rivetting! I'm eagerly waiting for the next installment of this; its going to be a tough cookie in Betty Crocker's kitchen before Inuyasha lets that pass up, but I'm also interested to see whether Hojo gets to hold all the glass at gunpoint...
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Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 03:55 CDT
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School shootings are very a serious subject and I do not condone them at all, but they do make an interesting plot line from an author's stand point. You get to ask questions like "What would so-and-so do in this situation?" It sounds like the start to an interesting story and I await the next chapter.
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