| "Safe" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
Reviewed By: lindy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 10:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
please come back and finish this story (puppy eyes)PLEEEAASssse!
|
Reviewed By: Suzy Q 001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When are you going to continue this story because it's really good. I have been looking for updates about it.
|
Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was a bit skeptical about someone taking on the subject of a school shooting. You did it quite well. The emotional tension was high, as it should be in such a case, and the action moved at such a pace that the appropriate tension was maintained. I find that in the series the tension of the moment is often lost in the slow progression of events. You are a very talented writer.
|
Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 17:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. You showed the tension and fear perfectly. Love the insights into IY's mind. Can't wait to see him/his reaction when he sees her again, and hers as well. Very good story.
|
Reviewed By: the evil fluffy muffin queen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 16:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow! great job! thanks for the update! im glad kagome survived......so far........ update soon please! couple of mistakes but its still TOTALLY AWESOME!!! i think you should make Kagome have a relapse or something that sends her back to the hospital or something like........ WOOT great job and keep up the great work!!!! also is this going to be a short fic or a long one?
|
Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: September 12, 2007 14:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a ton better... and I'm so relieved Kagome's alright. I still can't believe Hojo would do something like that. He never seemed like the kind of boy to do that... so I agree with Jii-chan and Higurshi-san. I really thought she was going to die... I'm so happy she didn't. You're a great author, ya know that? ^^... anyways, next chance you have time to write... please update soon! Arigato!
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really like it so far... glad that kagome is okay... wonder what inuyasha will do now... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
|
Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 11:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank goodness Kagome is going to be OK. Inu will NEVER let her out of his sight again! :) Can't wait to read more!
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 10:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
the emotion portrayed by the characters was almost palpable, one couldn't help but feel the tension, grief, dread, anger, hope and relief. . . a master artist can elicit emotion and feeling from those who view his or her work... in this you have succeeded. . . . a moving and seriously profound story. ~ thank you, ginny
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
phew thank god Kagome is alright!! or Inuyasha would go on a blood rage >.< awww please dont be long!! im loving every bit of this!!
|
Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*panicks* HOLY SHIT!!! OMG HOJO DID THAT!?! DUDE!!!! SHIT I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY!!!! OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
|
Reviewed By: Squeegee_B [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems very out of character for Hojo to do something like that, but then that's what people always think in cases like this. It's a good read so far, and I like how at the end of both chapters, both Inuyasha and Kagome were saying that her time was supposed to be safe.
|
Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 21:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is interesting, but I am not as fond of it as your other fics. This one feels a bit rough, though I know that you like to revise alot so I am looking forward to what is to come.
|
Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: September 09, 2007 18:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay I'm FREAKING. Out. Here! This is really scary... even though it's just a story. I HATE ERI AND YUKA!!! There such Baka's!!! Arrrgh! Okay um... only thing I really need to say is that it all seemed to be happening kinda fast in the second chapter... could you kinda slow it down a bit? Anyways... Update soon please! Or at least when you get a chance... thanks!
|
Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 16:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooooh the tension. Love this, very well written. More, more.
|
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
