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"The Twin Shrines" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: girlinjapan  On: January 08, 2008 07:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Just a thought... Since Higurashi means sunset, maybe Hinode, which means sunrise, would be a better name than Shizu?
 Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 18, 2007 03:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok... I think Sato is an idiot for pretending to be a youkai and I think it is odd that is Sato would know of Sango and Miroku, but Kagome would not until she met them. I also think that Inuyasha would never let Kagome go off with some baka even if she was from her time. He would go with them. Also the last chapter contained no text except the disclaimer, chapter title and that stuff between them. This was the same with the chapter before that with the exception the the scene of going through the well and up the ladder was there... I would assume this is a mistake, but I know that there is more than one possible explanation. Aside from these things I like the idea of a sister shrine and the writing is rather humorous.
 Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 11, 2007 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok here's your review. It sounds like it could get interesting, but so far I am not really sure what to make of it. I would think that a Neko Youkai from Kagome's time might recognize Inuyasha's name... and why would Youkai be keeping a shrine? I was waiting to get these answers before I review, but I guess I will give in just to see something about my favorite Monk...

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