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| "Breaking All the Rules" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Stargate27 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2009 08:26 CST
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LOng shot, I know, but I'm still hoping you'll come back to this fic and finsih it or post the notes you had already on it without it being edited. Huggles Gillie
| Title: Please continue
Reviewed By: Stargate27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 10:13 CDT
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Yes, I know I can be annoying but I really, really hope you'll continue with this oen and that it won't become another fantastic, unfinished fic. It's been nearly a year now. I wish we'd get new chapters so we'd finally know how it would continue. How will reach Kenken first? How will the talk between the three of them go? How much will ken reveal of his past or will Schuldig interfere here?
| Title: Continuation
Reviewed By: Stargate27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2008 14:16 CDT
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Continue? Is this on hiatus? I hope not. I hope you'll continue this soon. I try to check your LJ regurarly but it hasn't been updated either in ages.
| Title: Continue?
Reviewed By: Stargate27 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ne, I know I've asked already but it's been over more than half a year since this was updated and I want to know so bad how this will go on. Who will reach Ken first? What will Yohji and Aya say? What will happen when it gets tossed out into the open finally that Ken has been sleeping with the both of them? Will Ken get hurt during his battle with Farfarello? Is Schuldig going to do one of his mind games? How is Ken going to react to all of this? Please, please, continue.
| Reviewed By: Stargate27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, are you ever going to finish this story? I've been dying to know what will happen next and it's already been so long since there was an update for this one.
| Reviewed By: Aoi Hana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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It's so great! Omi is my favorite, I don't like Omi+Nagi but your stories are so good that I will live. But what had happend to that story where Omi has been shot? Are you going to finish it? Please.
| Title: Schwarz Arrives, "Christie" Dies
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww man the final foreshadowing in the other chapter... I just know it's poor Kenken whose about to pay the price for all the shitty moods going on. You know it always amazes me how some fic authors will write fics where Schwarz can barely stand to be in the same room together. But you know even Schu's telepathy couldn't help them to work so well together if they hated each other. The one scene in the anime with Crawford and Nagi might seem harsh but I really think that Crawford was trying despite knowing it was futile to sway Nagi away from what happened when Farf 'killed' Tot. Ahhh The Schwarz boys seem a bit different here than in your past stories. The 'bloodlust' bit gives a more violent edge to Schu than his disasterous pizza attempt for Farf. LOL Hmm What's up with Crawford's headache? Damn my swiss cheese brain. This is before the tower right? Hmmm is this a bit of prelude to the Schwarz story that you've told us about? It seems to fit the idea. FOL!!!! Walk the family dog, well at least it means he's loved right? LOL That was too funny but perfectly Nagi. Ahh I wondered how Omi and Nagi were keeping that little secret from the Oracle. Nags might keep it from Schu but not Omi. I'm also hazarding that "Christie" just bit the dust... A Farfie if only you knew, that little act probably did not hurt God in the slightest. ;p Hah, determined, try stubborn, muleheaded and persistent too. Okay yeah that was the line I needed so this is prior to the tower. Granted we don't really know enough about what Schwarz did or what happened to them during all that time so it will be interesting to see what you have in store for them. _________________________________________________ You know one of these days Media Miner is going to come up with the idea of 'paragraphs for their reviewers. I'm surprised that the boys didn't consider that the scream might have come from the man they're looking for. Okay I went back and checked chapter 4 book 2 and have come to the conclusion since no one seems to be worried that Ken is weaponless that I read that wrong and that his bugnucks are stuck in the extended position. I was reading closed as meaning retracted but if I read it as the mechanism in his palm is closed that would have the claws out. Well that is a little comfort it means he's not a total sitting duck then. God you know if Kenken ran into Farf right about now he might actually consider it fate....... Hmm Omi's found the victim, I'm taking it that signs indicate to him that it really is one of Christie's victims? Geez if only Kenken was a mind reader for a few precious seconds there after Yohji contacted him. He'd at least get a good dose of concern which in turn could give him some hope. I'm glad to see that Yohji has the sense to be mad at himself. He should, if he wants exclusivity he needs to make it clear. ________________________________________________ Ahhh hell why do I always have to be right? This bad, soooo bad in the state that Ken is in. Ah a helping hand for Omi that the others may have not wanted, since they don't want Omi to be the dispatcher of the evening. But gah!! Back to Kenken and Farf please! ~Can you hear the screaming coming from the West and the Rocky Mountains? That's me feeling the agony of the first stages of cliff hanger anxiety and next chapter anticipation.~ Awesome chapter!!
| Title: Tensions Mount
Reviewed By: skippyscatt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yatta!!! Schwarz, Schwarz, Schwarz! As you can see I do love Schwarz. hehehe Gah, when I let you know how much I loved Sokoke........... FOL From the mouths innocent young assassins. LOL Omi can't blame himself, Yohji doesn't really have the right to be yelling at Ken especially going into another dangerous mission in the same night. It's not like he's said he wanted to be a 'couple' or anything. Ooops Omi, good catch but I would hazard to guess that you just made Yohji that much curiouser as to what or who you are seeing all the time. Was it a cousin of a classmate or a classmate? I'm going to have to go back to that first chapter in book 1 again. Not good Ken's mindset for this extended night of missions is not anywhere close to a safe zone. With your muses... ~remembers CNR~ Of course with a threesome coming up at least he won't be hospitalized. Hugs Kenken. I swear if Yohji would just claim him I mean actually say the damn words Ken would be there 100%. Now he's breaking apart because he can't be what both guys want. Especially since Aya's barely treating him better than some hooker off the street and Yohji's doing the jealous lover thing without actually making the verbal commitment. Damn I really hope that Omi keeps an eye on the others. Aya... I don't know he's probably okay for the new mission, Yohji is questionable, but Ken is a mess and with his bugnucks screwed up from the other kill he's a sitting duck. Okay yeah lets make that a suicidal sitting duck, crap. You know I really am going to be glad when we get a chance to see what the hell is going on in Aya's mind. I've got an idea what he's angry about, and if I am then he's made at himself but he's radiating so bad that Ken already upset is getting it full in the face. Okay that bothers me, I mean I know that being around all that dust would bother anyone but it seems at least from the wording that this was a stronger reaction. Borderline asthma? Or simply a building panic attack? You did a good job with the interlacing of the names in the right contexts. Just wanted to let you know that since you were concerned about it. It actually made it easy to see the way the minds were shifting when the guys were interacting and how they could go from assassin to man and back again in mid thought stream.
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