| "Thoughts at the attic" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: star-brella (not signed on) On: January 20, 2005 15:12 CST
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I love your fic, short and sweet. Are you going to update? Plz tell me you are. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 00:52 CDT
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Wiping the tears from my eyes. The first few chapters were ok, nothing really special, but that that last one...it was a real kicker.
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Reviewed By: Laina On: July 02, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. It was cute and sweet!!!! |
Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 01, 2003 04:56 CST
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Gonna update this?! I hope you do, it feels so unfinished! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 12:04 CDT
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I've read the whole story and it's great!!! Especially when Vegeta finds a box with his own stuff!!!! And when Bulma came up the attic. that part was really cute!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 24, 2002 01:02 CDT
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ouch. You certainly know how to yank on the heartstrings...damn, made me cry.
But, please, no offense, you might not want to call this done just yet, you left emotions running pretty high. Maybe something, some sort of resolution will come...
Keep me posted...
Jada |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 20:53 CDT
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I'm wondering if you realized this as you were writting, I was waiting for you to mention it somewhere in the end, but you didn't.. the reason Vegeta could smell Freeza.. it's the suit. He was killed in that suit wasn't he? You said it was the suit he wore when he came back from Namek, mind you that suit didn't have the wing things, it was more tank top shaped, it had a big hole in the center. That would certianly explain why Vegeta went into Shell Shock, I mean he died in that suit. Freeza's scent would be all over it.
Oh and I love that song too, it's so sad isn't it, breaks my heart every time I hear it. "This Woman's Work" I'm gonna go listen to it now and go cry a bit ;) |
Reviewed By: reddrag80 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2002 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT'S THE END!!!?? *Drops dead on the floor* Can't you like write a Sequel or something? Please I'm down on my knees begging you! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this fic. |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle 7 On: July 13, 2002 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely (if that's a word) done. And Ms2ry Angle 7 is glad you used her song idea. Job well done! |
Reviewed By: BGOKU On: July 12, 2002 23:09 CDT
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i have an idea, vegeta finds porno magazines in the attic :-p |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...and you're thinking to drag out his past? Damn. I don't have any helpful suggestions because, I think it will be very difficult to bring the tone of the story back up, after digging around in a box of Vegeta's memories...Good Luck, and please let me know when it's up...
Jada |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good introspection...makes my heart ache for our Saiyan Prince...
Jada |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWW!! This fanfic is sooo cute!! Vegeta is sooooo adorable!! Heehee. I have pictures of him smiling actually. They are kinda freaky cause it's him in his Saiyan armor on namek. I can send them to you if you like actually...hee hee....this is soooo cute!! I feel like drawing fanart of this...if you want me to look at my (GAY and UGLY) art and if you like it just email me!! thanks!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 12:14 CDT
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Can't wait to see the next chapie! |
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