| "The First Meeting of the MYAMP (Male Youkai Against Male Pregnancies)" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Kuro Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2009 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God... I simply love you. XD I haven't laughed so hard at a fan fiction in a LOOOONG time. Thank you SO much for writing this! Not only did you hit the nail on the head with the male pregnancies that are popping up everywhere, but also the fact that Kagome seems to be paired up with everyone (of which, I must admit, I am guilty). It was very humorous and a complete joy to read. I hope you write another one similar to it in the near future! :D
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Reviewed By: Tricia1224 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. Nearly fell out of my chair laughing. I almost didn't read this because I am not into Mpreg. Glad I did. To funny. Poor guys.
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Title: Daddy's baby Mommy's ?????????????
Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HA!HA!HA! I really would like to know where you were when you conjured this up! Ha! Ha! Ha! I swear! Too much! You made my day with this one. I guess I'm a bit devious, but I would like to see the process of labor and birth. The birth canal being that good old "rod" where the depositing of both seed and the fruit share the same journey. That would be twice as nice! Heh! Heh! Heh! And what's with my meanie greenie grabbing Kagome? Ha! All those fine youkia knocked up! Ha!Ha!Ha! Peace!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 25, 2007 12:09 CDT
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Funny funny stuff! I've read a lot of Mpreg lately too, even one with Sess being the mommie. This cracked me up completely!
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Reviewed By: Riecumbee [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMFAO oh I can't breath that was so frickin funny it was totally awesome I can't wait for the next chapter or a sequal
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Reviewed By: BoxingKing [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LMAO! That was awesome! I have no idea why everyone hates mpreg so much, but then I haven't read too many in a long time. This was perfect. The men have finally been reduced to the pains of womanhood that they normally help create. Serves them right. :D I tried to look up the picture that you were inspired from, but I couldn't figure out how to get the mature content window off. :( Anyways, this was awesome. You reduced the men down to "hens", and that was just perfect. They needed to be taken down from their strong, handsome, stone exteriors featured in everything else. Great work! And a break from a long fic is always welcome when writing! I would definately welcome a second chapter, if nothing else just a second meeting where they try and get serious, or *gasp* where one of the infallible characters that was peeking and laughing through the window is shamefully added! That would be great! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for your next update!
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Title: OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: jen9 On: September 18, 2007 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO!!! *rolling on the floor laughing my arse off* i love this so much! i personally dont get why some ppl feel the need to get the guys pregnant, i mean it cant happen so why write it but i love your mocking of this :) you are now one of my hero's!!! luv jenna xoxox
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Title: AHAHAHAAA!!!
Reviewed By: HalfBlackWolfDemon (nli) On: September 17, 2007 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! that... that was... *laughs hysterically* omg... you frickin rock!!! *rofl* i would love to see a second chapter of this, and omg! *dies laughing*
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Reviewed By: DYquem (not signed in) On: September 17, 2007 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there an 11 or 12 for "enjoyment factor?" Really funny. I so loved all the comments, espc. the bits about "its all the fault of the Yu Yu boys" and that their salvation of this emasculation is Kagome. Its so true. That's why I like Yu YU / Inuyasha xovers so much. There just really isn't an interesting strong female character in the show. Unfortunately, Genkai doesn't really count for this sort of thing, but I did LOVE the bit where she and grandpa got togetherin BWM. Back to this one. . . Great Parody. I generally dislike male pregnancy also. I always feel sorry for Hiei when he is emasculated. Your reward for this great fic is to glue yourself back in the chair and get out BWM, even if the chapter is shorter than prior ones.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PURE GOLD thats what this is totally, made me laugh from beginning to the end. Haven't reah much of yours lately, too bloody busy working to even work on my own stuff. when i glanced at black widow i noticed u hav uploaded at least 7 new chapters since i last read the fic, i hav tons of catching up to do. well anyways this was brilliant parody one-shot which totally in some ways expressed my views about M-Preg. Thank you
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Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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thank you! Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! Male preg drives me up the wall and across the roof. THANK YOU!!
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*gigglesnortchortle* That has to be one of the funniest parodies I've ever read! *chuckle*... Hey now, don't feel bad for writing this instead of the next chapter of BWM when I put off Sassouta to draw Itachi... How funny that Inuyasha didn't even know who did that to him! *giggle* I could just see poor Kagome standing there watching all those swollen males waddling toward her. That was just classic! And to have all of those serious males clattering like hens about stretch marks and nausea was unbelievably entertaining. It always bothered me to be interested in reading a story only to be stopped by "MPreg" in the summary...it just doesn't work that way! I, for one, have never once run across a male pregnancy in romance novels, I'll say that much. This was a wonderful sidetrack!
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Title: Ow, ow, my stomach hurts!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ah, thank you! I'm so sick of the stupid male pregnancy fics that I've almost stopped reading any fanfiction. I'm wiping off tears of hilarity and blessing you for a great laugh.
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Reviewed By: Jadedragon24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was hilarious.
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 17, 2007 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh my sides...you genius, you total, utter genius! Never, in my entire time scouring the web for fan fiction, have i read something a parody like this! It's gold, pure gold! Every line, every characterisation had me grinning or laughing out loud! And when it couldn't get any better, you bring in Kagome-chan! What a way to support the crossovers! I bow humbly at your amazing fic! ^_^
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