Reviewed By: Peachyloco On: October 20, 2007 18:15 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: I think this story is realistic and I that you should keep on writing. I've really enjoyed it and have been coming back for updates....all to be disappointed!