| "Azumanga H-Daioh Part One: The Experiment" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: A nice Gem...
Reviewed By: Newtob Exile On: July 07, 2008 11:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Azumanga lemons aren't very common nor are good ones very common, but you managed to make both a good Azumanga story and a good lemon at the same time. This is a very enjoyable story and I look forward to whatever else is in store for the girls. Now for some suggestions: In the realm of parings, I suggest at least one chapter devoted to Tomo/Yomi. I dont particulary like the pairing, but it is one of "mainstream" ones so doing it would be nice. Others include Kagura/Osaka (seems to be popular in fanfiction.net...) Sasaki/Yomi (there the 2 tallest?) Yukari/Nyamo(another "mainstream" one. Are you planning on using them?) Naymo or Yukari/ other girls This brings up another question. Are you planning on having Yukari of Nyamo "teachinig" the other girls if you catch my drift? :D you know best, but Im sure some of us will enjoy that...
|
Reviewed By: dvils_prodigy On: April 01, 2008 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice it's an enjoyable story to read...please continue
|
Reviewed By: spikesagitta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy it, nuff say! see ya next chapter then :)
|
Reviewed By: WhiskeySour [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fact that you paired up Kaorin and Sakaki. In terms of pairings, I feel the ones youve got are smashing. Chiyo and Ayumu "Osaka", Kaorin and Sakaki, Kagura and Tomo. Maybe throw Yomi in with a one of them, not Tomo since that is highly overused. I give your story, thus far, a 10/10. Cheers.
|
Title: don't stop!
Reviewed By: "thebigW" (not signed in) On: February 29, 2008 09:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Please let Kaorin get what we know she's wanted for so long! Wonderful gem you've written here.
|
Reviewed By: hay451 On: January 16, 2008 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, excellent fare in an ocean of schlock. I eagerly await future chapters (perhaps a little Yomi/Kaorin/Sakaki?)
|
