Title: Nicely done Reviewed By: BesiegedInfection [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2010 10:19 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: Very good start, thus far. It's cool that you're going into the past to place the characters, and no- writing about Nazis does not make you a Nazi. I agree. Only a fool would think so. I like how you're placing the characters, and you should really continue this story. It's got a good start, and all it needs now is a little kick in the direction it's headed towards.
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