| "The Consequences of Falling" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: babygrl216 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
does this mean that they're not related?.. since they dont recornize each other? good fic! email me wen u update please |
Reviewed By: jedibabe On: June 26, 2002 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOWS!~LUV IT TO DEATH!~PAN AND GOTEN ARE A CUTE COUPLE!~I LIKE THE WAY YOU MADE THEM MEET!~KAWAIINESS!!~PLEASE FINISH IT SOON!~I CAN'T WAIT!~
-Jedibabe- |
Reviewed By: Bri On: June 25, 2002 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, BP. U surprised me, I didn't know u were so good at writing fics! That was awesome! I loved it! So, now that u have ur first review, are u gonna tell ur buddy Bri when u plan to post ch.2? Goten/Pan, that's so cute! Considering that they're related, it's still really cute! Don't forget to check out my new chapters/fics on fanfiction BP!
-Bri |
