| "Mobile Suit Gundam Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kitsune1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2012 02:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
First thing first. I can read English very well and certainly I understand it, but I'm not very good writing it. So, I was eager to read this but once I start... the more I read, it became more of a disappointment. Too many characters, so many that you barely give them a "soul". The only character I recognize was Relena. The general point is interesting, but where are the GW pilots?, are they going to appear or just that bunch of OC and miscellaneous characters? I'm not patient enough to discover it myself, the fic doesn't inspire me to keep reading. Also, your style of writing is... poor. I really can't describe it without this becoming a flame. Left too much in the air, uses too much dialogue and the paragraphs are atrocious. This certainly needs more details in the narration. Write abut the character thoughts, what are his/her surrounds, what he/she feels or see or hear, anything that give the reader the "juice" to imagine the situation accurately. This has potential (but is not my type of fic), you just need to polish your narrative skills. |
Title: That was rude!
Reviewed By: TyniDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 12:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
This is a good fic and dont let ck086 stop you from writing either! that was so mean! i think i is a great fic!
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Title: You've got to be kidding me...
Reviewed By: CKO86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2009 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tuxedo Mark is a no-talent hack who couldn't write a grocery list, let alone decent fanfic.
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Title: Bravo
Reviewed By: TyniDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2009 13:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great ending....There will be more right?!!!Man I rele hope so. It is so sad to see a good fic come to an end. well i can reread it over and over again. Thank you for continuing and finishing the fic. It must have been tough. hope to see more of your work soon.
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Title: I'm loving it
Reviewed By: TyniDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2008 15:13 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love all your characters by the way, and i am loving the way you do this whole fic. keep going this is the best. it must rele be taking alot of your time..... but i am glad that you keep going.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: TyniDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 13:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay i am a little late but better late than never i always say, i love this fic and it is well written, it is officially one of my favs.
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