"Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Liz Night On: June 27, 2008 22:29 CDT Comment/Review: Pretty good. Can't wait to read more. Love the little things at the end of each chapter. Please write more.
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 23:30 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a great story please keep updating when you have the time.
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Reviewed By: DesertThorns [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 13:31 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I think I like where you are going with this story so far I too am a fan of Daisuke and Satoshi. It sounds neat :o I will continue to tune in :D and it must suck to have your kitchen blown up all the time... O-o; Good luck :3 and keep writing. -DesertThorns
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