| "The Weapon" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Shinu 13th Sage Sage of Pain [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this. I'm a bit disappointed that you've only got three chapters up here. I hope that you'll post more soon. It's going to be interesting to see what Ranma does now that he's stuck forever as a girl. Just a small suggestion, you might want to try working on your grammar just a bit. Some words could have been chosen better, too, but overall this has been an excellent read so far. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Quontir [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting enough, hopefully more will be coming up.
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Reviewed By: Ancalador [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2009 05:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great start, looking forward to seeing how Ranma deals with his cyberisation and being a girl. Since martial artists can infuse their weapons with ki (kuno's boken and ryoga's bandanas) it might be interesting to see what Ranma can do by infusing his limbs and eventually weapons with ki. Looking forward to future installments.
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Title: your story
Reviewed By: xblackstarx On: November 09, 2008 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a pretty good chapter. you should update more often though. i noticed that you have a fanfiction.net account... i saw it on there first. it is a pretty good story but its just the fact that you don't update much. i think you should totally continue this.
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Reviewed By: S Cubed [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I'm not quite sure what to think based on what's gone on through the first two chapters. It feels like a giant prologue so far. In any case, this story has caught my attention, and I'll be looking out for future updates.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 11:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Neh, we all thrive on reviews. Only reason I didn't review with teh 2 versions of the first chapter was, well, I didn't like it, to be honest. The concept was great, and the execution in teh first chapter was pretty good. Though I dont' liek the second chapter as much, Ranma is freaked out for obvious reasons. Oh well. Anyway, update again soon, this might be interesting. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent start.
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