| "Just My Luck" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: azera jh On: December 28, 2008 03:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update this story soon!
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Title: Zomfg
Reviewed By: Kisei [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! I love this story do far! ;D Mainly cause it has Itachi in it. But that's beside the point. Great story. Write more. ^-^'
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Title: kewl
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz write the next chappie
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Reviewed By: partyrockstar100 On: September 27, 2007 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good! i hope you continue it :)
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Title: "Sister-san"
Reviewed By: ITtsi On: September 27, 2007 11:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
XDDDD AHAHAHA! Sorry, Kara...THAT WAS SO FUNNY THOUGH! Dork OTher than that it's great
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 08:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this so far! your doing well!~ ^_^ I'll point out though that you have Sasuke calling Itatchi 'Nee-san' at first when he said it I thought he was talking about his mother :P Nee-san is sister Ni-san is brother ^_^ other than that i found no problems ^^ look foreward to the next chapter
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