| "Blood Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 16:58 CDT
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hehe I agree w/ Hitsugaya, I didn't think about that til i saw that comment. God i wish i could just strangle Naraku right now.... oooooooo! I'm pissed, i wanna know what happens next before i stangle someone!!!! lol =P
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no offence or anything but shouldnt Kagome have sensed the jewel shard in Inuyasha? I Mean come on! Its KAGOME! we are talking about here! *takes this from first episode* kas ie with me! KA-GO-ME! and did Miroku and Sango really die!? i dont think they would let themself be killed by the likes of Narku. I hope that you update soon. and i was hoping that you would make a chaoter where they come back seeing as they neevr really diesd. That would be cool. yeha! good job tho! great story. i so hope that Inuyasha and KAgome get out ok. and i hope that Narku gets a slow and VERY painful death...GREAT STORY! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 11:48 CDT
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Why didn't Kagome sense the jewel shard in Inuyasha? She has always sensed shards in others no where they are. She even sensed the fake shard Kouga had in his arm.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... kinda sad... did miroku & sango really die... wonder how inuyasha will save kagome & himself... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 23:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... thought inuyasha would finally make kagome his mate... but they took too long... he should have just claimed her without too much of the foreplay... especially after he told the the truth... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 18:56 CDT
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nooooo!! dammit it was gettin good til naraku had to fuck it up.. god i wanna see more!!
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Title: Quite good!
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write very well! The story is heart racing and heart wrenching. Your chapters are quite short, (and I thought mine were LOL), which makes you just clamor for more. Only criticism is I think Kagome is a bit too giggly for my taste. But I can't wait to read more! He just can't give her to Naraku, please! By the way, where is Tessaiga?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... really like it so far... hope kagome & inuyasha can find a way out of naraku's evil plans... inuyasha should make kagome into his mate already... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. The sentences flow together very well, the script is interesting, but there are only two problems that you could fix: a) Naraku has a baboon mask on, not a wolf. b) Inuyasha needs to talk more. It's mostly him thinking, but he still needs some more dialogue. Anyway, it's still an enjoyable fic. I like stories that appeal to your inner emotions.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of those times when ya just wanna scream at the characters (like on TV, lol)... "NO, don't do that, do something else", and "kick the bad guys ass..." lol. But alas, ya just gotta wait it out and see what transpires. Lol. Good chaps. Now, onward and upward, and update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 20:33 CDT
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god this sentence made me shudder... "I want you to bring Kagome here, and you will watch as I claim the one you love as my own right before you eyes." ehhh...short but good, keep it comin!!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh.. interesting. Cant wait to see where this goes. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ehhh! i wanna know what happens next!!!! =P
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: September 27, 2007 19:30 CDT
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I'm intrigued! It was just enough to whet the imagination. Please do continue, I would really enjoy a good read.
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 17:20 CDT
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Keep going and make the chapters longer
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