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Reviewed By: Da Grrrl On: January 05, 2008 10:41 CST
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I came across this and had a good time. First fiction I've read (completely) in over 8 months. Nice job -hope to see more from you. -InuGrrrl
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Reviewed By: Renji18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2007 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
No fair! It's soooo sad! Your not allowed to make sad stories! Wah! Bring them back! Bring them back! *Sigh* It was a good story though....it just made me cry. Write another one with a happy ending!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 19:39 CST
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"... jerked his right had forcefully against the metal bond. To his delight the chain snapped much easier than he has expected. He was begging to shift his weight to the right when a loud noise by the door caught his attention." I'm guessing you meant his right HAND and was Beginning. (not usually correction woman but wanted to let you know) I'll write a more complete review at the end
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Reviewed By: babybuga222 On: November 04, 2007 20:16 CST
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Following this story on the edge of my seat, I'll admit I was impressed. This story was very well written, kept me intrigued, and didn't keep me out of the loop because I have limited knowledge of Inuyasha. I hope you will keep writing, and I wanted to add-great song choice at the end, one of my favs, reccomended by yet another great writer.
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Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 23:40 CDT
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Check out my new story, Forever, and it might answer your questions :)
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Reviewed By: rya35 On: October 24, 2007 20:17 CDT
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wow, awesome story. I know the lst chapter says epilogue, but the what about the foot steps and flash of sliver hair? Will there be a s sequel? Was it sesshomaru that Inuyasha saw before he died?
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: saladbar reading On: October 23, 2007 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. i've read romeo and juliet but this takes shakespeare off the top! an excellent thrilling story about sacrifice, torment, violence, and of course, love. something i could read over and over again.
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 02:14 CDT
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ok i just saw that line now...I'm still confused. I've spent like 25 mins trying to figure out what that line meant!! =/
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Reviewed By: bigbluemonkey555 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 14:07 CDT
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I'm surprised none of you noticed this line right here: "he made out footsteps and a flash of silver hair." I'll let you decide what that means.
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 11:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY!!! THEY BOTH DIE!!! WHAT IN THE HELL MAN!!! but...aside from that the story was totally awesome...man u got me crying now =/
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. I love it but too bad that Inuyasha and Kagome died. Thats sad. Really sad. but i really liked it. I really did! GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice but sad story... too bad kagome & inuyasha died... but at least they were together... good work...
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Title: very well done
Reviewed By: babybuga222 On: October 17, 2007 22:26 CDT
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You go into detail just enough to keep you wanting more yet satisfy you at the same time...love the story line-a bit sad, but all classics are. Keep writing, I'll keep reading!
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Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: babybuga On: October 16, 2007 20:59 CDT
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Every time I get on here and see a new story I get a chill just waiting to read it...you are an amazing writer, this one made me so sad I had tears in my eyes. You are amazing writer, and I wish I knew you...
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Reviewed By: Kikitare On: October 15, 2007 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
red Wow, that was a great fanfic! I loved it! I hope you finish it soon!
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