| "Blood Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 18:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
nooooo!! dammit it was gettin good til naraku had to fuck it up.. god i wanna see more!!
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Title: Quite good!
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You write very well! The story is heart racing and heart wrenching. Your chapters are quite short, (and I thought mine were LOL), which makes you just clamor for more. Only criticism is I think Kagome is a bit too giggly for my taste. But I can't wait to read more! He just can't give her to Naraku, please! By the way, where is Tessaiga?
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really like it so far... hope kagome & inuyasha can find a way out of naraku's evil plans... inuyasha should make kagome into his mate already... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: inu_luver17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. The sentences flow together very well, the script is interesting, but there are only two problems that you could fix: a) Naraku has a baboon mask on, not a wolf. b) Inuyasha needs to talk more. It's mostly him thinking, but he still needs some more dialogue. Anyway, it's still an enjoyable fic. I like stories that appeal to your inner emotions.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of those times when ya just wanna scream at the characters (like on TV, lol)... "NO, don't do that, do something else", and "kick the bad guys ass..." lol. But alas, ya just gotta wait it out and see what transpires. Lol. Good chaps. Now, onward and upward, and update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 20:33 CDT
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god this sentence made me shudder... "I want you to bring Kagome here, and you will watch as I claim the one you love as my own right before you eyes." ehhh...short but good, keep it comin!!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh.. interesting. Cant wait to see where this goes. Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: RuneWarriorGal07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ehhh! i wanna know what happens next!!!! =P
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Reviewed By: FuzzyToad On: September 27, 2007 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm intrigued! It was just enough to whet the imagination. Please do continue, I would really enjoy a good read.
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Reviewed By: Inulover1253 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Keep going and make the chapters longer
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