| "Convergence" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: :(
Reviewed By: Exedrintheheadachemedicine [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2008 15:29 CST
Comment/Review:
have you abandoned this great story? poor Schu - you cant leave it like that!!!!!!!! must write more! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ! will give you brownies
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Reviewed By: wingofshinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2007 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it . Pls do continue
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just came across this and it immediately drew me in from the first chapter. Your writing flows so well and is so easy to read. I couldn't believe it when I got to the end of what you've got posted so far! The boys all stay true to their characters and it's easy to see a storyline like this developing from the end of the anime. Aya's telepathic bossiness is so easy to imagine and perfectly him. Poor Omi (I always liked him as Omi better) and all his trying to help his friends turning out so badly. At least he has Nagi. I am really interested to see where Schuldig's obsession with Aya goes, especially once Yoji shows up. You better not make me cry when he returns Aya's katana! I'll be adding this one to my favorites so I don't miss an update.
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two more wonderful chapters! I love Aya's telepathic bossiness, and the hints that there will be a continuing connection in some form with Schuldig. The background on Yohji's life fit beautifully, and helps us keep some sympathy for him as well. I'm delighted that you were true to the anime, and showed the problems Yohji was having as well as the moving moment when he made the promise to return Aya's katana. Poor Mamarou, he made decisions that he thought would be best for all, only to find almost everyone angry with him and distrustful -- very realistic. I greatly enjoyed Crawford's role and conversation with Schuldig -- very true to his voice, but with wonderful hints of caring.
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: Exedrintheheadachemedicine [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is off to a great start! i am very wrapped up in it already - i can't wait to read more! hope you update soon - i am dying to read what goes down with yohji and omi and then later yohji, schu and aya :) i love drama ;) keep up the awesome writing
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Title: oO
Reviewed By: jarnsaxa [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 07:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
i´m sorry, but... who told you, "schwuler" means pretty boy?! oO I haven´t read the story yet, because i copy them first into word or the editor (at the moment I can´t be online for long terms) but i saw your translation and think I should tell you, that "Schwuler" means not pretty, but gay XD "Hübscher" (you can write Huebscher, if the ö doesn´t work) means pretty boy. Greetings from Germany ^.~
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I celebrate with great happiness your posting of "Convergence" here. I had been waiting anxiously for hopeforlorn to become active again so I could read more of your terrific story. You have a wonderful feel for the characters as well as suspenseful plotting. You give us great clues as to what might be happening, but the puzzle pieces just tantalyze us more. Each character is shown not only through their thoughts but through the observations and biases of others, making them not only real to the reader but helping us to care for each of them. I very eagerly look forward to more.
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