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| "What I Think of Her" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Adrymchls@gmail.com On: December 17, 2009 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very OOC and over-exaggerated. Ginny's not type of girl to freak out like that even if she is jealous, as seen with Cho in GOF and OOTP. In this stoy Hermione comments on how immature what Ginny's doing is, but having Harry ask Hermione to marry her like that and Hermione's reaction were very immature, it's like telling a child they can't have candy then eating candy right in front of them. Also when Ron talked it seemed very forced. However, your writig style and decriptive are very good and I just didn't like charcterization.
| Reviewed By: fanficmaster [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 15:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
NICE! VERY GOOD! H/HR FOREVER! Oh BTW, review on my story, 'An Unforgettable Meeting.'
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