| "Kitsune Bi - An xXxHolic Fan-Fiction" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Holy Wow
Reviewed By: DuosAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2015 01:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I saw the email notifications this morning my eyes about
popped out of my head. I had completely given up this story for
abandoned. I am so happy to have been wrong, even though this is
going in a WAY different direction than I thought it would. Still,
I rather like this direction. I greatly look forward to seeing what
comes next.
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Reviewed By: marshmallow [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2010 09:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is fantastic. it is the most original d/w i have had the pleasure of reading. it is excellently paced and you have done a wonderful jop on descripting watanuki and how he would react in such instances. also the potrayal of doumeki is excellent. i look foward to the next chapter. p.s. just love love love the story.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2009 15:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm absolutely enthralled by this story I couldn't stop reading. though I never thought I'd be so angry with Doumeki. I can't wait to read more - I hope at least Doumeki will feel guilty for his idiocy in the end.
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Title: In Hell...Who'd of thought? XD
Reviewed By: XxHydexX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2009 20:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got so much to say, but I'm not sure what order to put my thoughts in ^^; I guess we'll start with the fact that I'm excited! I would really like a glimpse of Doumeki's thoughts right now as I can only imagine what he's up to. XD Yaay for independent Watanuki! Though I have a few worries in that regard. I am a strict DoumekixWatanuki fan, so third parties are of little to no interest to me ^__^; I can understand Watanuki going to the fox for his powers and to possibly get back at Doumeki, but I'm of the opinion that he would not preform sexual acts with him since he has now discovered that he may love Doumeki. (That and he's possibly traumatized from his previous experience ^^;) I'm sorry, I know that you as the author know where you are going with this and I'm sure it will be brilliant no matter what, but seeing some of the reviews hinting at "I like the fox, maybe the fox and the demon should get in on the action too" (or something like that) kinda put me off a bit. This is not a Porn Without Plot fic, and quite frankly there are enough of those flouting about in this series. I cannot at this point in time see Watanuki getting with anyone else unless something dramatic happens -__-; Terribly sorry, but I felt the need to get that off my chest, I hold no ill will against anybody that thinks the idea is intriguing (or hot), but for me it really is all about plot. The writer's thoughts, creativity, and writing technique are what make a story worth reading ya know? Any ways, I'll shut up, I made this more of a rant about my ideals than about the glory that is your fic ^^; Thank you so much for sharing, I can't wait for the next installment! ~Passing Reader/Hyde
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Title: yes!!!!!!!!! updates!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: kuramas30 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this fanfic. I found it this summer. I was so excited to receive notifications that it had been updated. I'm sorry that I've not reviewed it before. I'm really liking the premise. I feel sorry for Watanuki after what Doumeki did. I hope he get him back good. I'm liking Az and the kitsune general. Is Az from another anime series or is he orginal? I can't wait for the next update. I hope it is soon! Wynddancer on LJ
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Title: A.K.A: Passing Reader
Reviewed By: XxHydexX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2009 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me just say this, this story does not have NEARLY enough reviews. I created this account for the sole purpose of remedying that problem. Second: This is the best and the only xXxHolic fanfiction I bother to keep up with. The plot is brilliant, you make both characters believable and very sensual. I've wanted nothing more than to review this story when I first found it, but sadly, my computer crashed and I lost all my data, along with your story :( I am very glad to see that you've began updating again enabling me to find this fic once more. Thank you so much for your time and effort, you make DoumekixWatanuki fiction worth reading. I eagerly look forward to more of your work in the future! =D ~Passing Reader &/or Hyde
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Reviewed By: golden_flame4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 03:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this fic! i do hope you continue it~ :D and maybe let the fox get some action too? *grins and wriggles eyebrows suggestively* lol. XD
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Reviewed By: BeccaBear3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2009 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. It definitely shows promise of an amazing plot. I wish you'd hurry up and finish it! >:O It's so amazing! I love how in character they all are, that there is a lot of humor, some smut and a tiny bit of angst thrown in there(just a smidgeon). I'm so curious about the rest of the story though! This is the only unfinished xxxholic story that I keep rereading. More I say! More!
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Reviewed By: Shinoga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2008 22:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodness I just read this for the second time I think. I just love it! Your general characterization is spot on and the detailed charaterization is highly believable given the circumstances they are in. I always saw Doumeki as something a closet pervert (ie you don't know he's a pervert till you're close enough for him to pull you into the closet with him for a bit of fun.) I feel so empathetic towards Watanuki in the embrassing bits, as well I feel myself wanting to laugh alongside Yuuko at Watanuki's expense. I would dearly love to see the way this stoy resolves it's self....
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: sensei_musume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 10:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoy reading this story. it has a wonderful quality of creativity and excitement. the characters are like in the manga and i can really see everything happening how its written. good job. keep it up. i await the next character. :)
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Title: In reply...
Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 05:22 EST
Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for your comments here on MM & on FF, Kohona! I most certainly will continue with this fic, I'm just neck deep in deadlines at the moment. Believe me, this is not the end of the story.
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Reviewed By: Kohana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 23:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe there are no reviews for this fanfiction on MM.org. Terribly sorry for reviewing on both here and FF.net, and I promise not to write a book for a review, as I already seemed to do... Like I said previously, this fanfiction is written very well, and based on my knowledge of more ff hunting done today, it is, by far, the best I've read. I encourage you to continue the plot, as I can't wait to see how it turns out.
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