| "Sakura's Party" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: random reader On: November 03, 2007 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a good premise and it would be a great fic, but you really need to work on your spell ing and grammar. It's "gonna", not "ganna" if you're not going to say "going to." Good job withe the O.C. and like i said, it would be a great fic, but it's kind of hard to read when you're trying to figure out what the author means by "ganna."
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Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL kool!!!! thats what i'm talking bout!! but what happen 2 neji getting sasuke back????
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Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 17:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
To.....(twitch)..........Short pls rite more and I've got riters block for my fics pls help me. Yaiyo:(
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Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was kool lol will neji ever get sasuke back? lol will there be any pranks going around? anyway i still like it!! :) :P
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Reviewed By: Kimaya Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is good please write more
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Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOO rite more please!!! And I hate hinata cuz i like Naruto Yaiyo:)
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Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 17:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LiKe I sAiD bEfOrE AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! more jokes plz!!!!! and thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AwSoMe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PlZ! WrItE mOrE oF tHiS fIc PlZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: It is me again
Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 11:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fik even more!!! Please write more....... Oh and read my fics Naruto Chat Rooms w/ me and New Girl in Konoah. R&R
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Title: OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2007 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LEE ISN"T WEARING HIS GREEN SPANDEX JUMP SUIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It is the end of the wurld sorry but please rite more I like this fik
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