| "Sakura's Party" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 07:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome chapter! I loved it when sasuke was like "I told you not to tell them or I'd blow up Ichiraku's!". That was so funny! Anyways, I know that I'm really late with updating my story but the next chapter will be up soon!!
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Title: AYYY
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 11:16 CDT
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I UPDATED MY STORY IF YOU WANTED TO READ IT.
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: July 31, 2008 21:18 CDT
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one thing i just thought of was if you had omochao annoy naruto so much that he would go on a major spaz attack lol but hey its not my fic just throwin it out there omochao: hi im omochao(robotic chao) and im here to help you!
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Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH MY EYES! LEE YOU BLINDED MEEEE! *banging head on table* Oh yeah this was a really good chappie!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 18 was hilarious honestly "fell down anime styl", your a genous. Also I noticed you've started to make less spelling mistakes good work. Anyway you picked the perfect song for hinata I myself have only seen the music vids of camp rock, and the duet thing just simply romantic.
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 14:28 CDT
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Yay. Naruto and Hinata sang together how romantical. Hahahahahahahahahahahaha! I'M NOT CRAZY!!! Update soon or I will devour Sasuke! Also yay you followed my advice and had Hinata sing a song. I was scared she'd sing a horse or a tomato.
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: July 31, 2008 12:04 CDT
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great chapter the duet was good and neji getting his ass kicked was hilarious cant wait for the next chapter ill probably lol too
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Reviewed By: MoonStar776 On: July 30, 2008 12:46 CDT
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Hinata should sing This is Me from Camp Rock!
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Reviewed By: MoonStar776 On: July 30, 2008 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was an overall great fanfic but checking Grammar and spelling from time to time won't be so bad(***Lee's grin and pose***).
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Reviewed By: anime4mealways On: July 24, 2008 02:19 CDT
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I LOVE THIS!!!! OMFG you HAVE to update it!!! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please! It is totally awesome, I love Sasuke and Sakura together lol, its pretty cool. Btw, youre kinda creeping me out a bit with the whole "lee" thing. Just to let you know, but i never really thought he was THAT creepy until i read this, youve changed my mind for life!!!! thank you for awakening me to this fact, now PLEASE WRITE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: sonicrider14 On: July 22, 2008 21:43 CDT
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rofl good chapter and sasuke is like simon except hes more of a jerk lol anyway good chapter cant wait for part 2
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Reviewed By: Naruto Fan Club [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny!! Poor Naruto (refering when he goes to the corner) *hugs him* Why does he smell like daisies?
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 14:38 CDT
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Great chap. I was laughing like maniacally the whole time. And I know what Hinata should sing. She should sing *Poses dramatically*.............................................................. ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... ................a song!
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Reviewed By: Vospader21 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 16 is an excellent edition to your awseome fanfic. And you portray the charachter's personality's perfectly, it's like when I read this Masashi Kishimoto wrote it himself. And another thing your still making careless little spelling mistakes. But don't worry the story is more than good enough for people to look the other way.
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Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2008 17:02 CDT
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Sorry didn't mean to say that twice also one more thing DWEAD MWOOSE!!!
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