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| "The Taste of Your Life" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Reviewed By: asianruby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic! Your spelling and grammar was a bit off...there were more than a few words that were misspelled or in the wrong places, and you changed tenses quite a few times. However, your plot was very creative and I loved your descriptions and the way the worded the emotions and feelings of the characters! The imagery was great and this was an awesomely written fic! All you have to do is get a friend or someone to edit your stories, and I'm sure your fics will be even better! :) Keep it up!
| Title: Spiffy ^_^
Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 04:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was really really good! You mispelled a few things and a bit of the grammar was kinda bad but other then that it was good! You give great discription in the fic. It was kinda sad at the end cause of the whole Tomoyo crying and everything. I mean, I would have thought that Sakura would have sent a letter or something to her friend and tell her sense Tomoyo was her best friend and Tomoyo was into the whole superstition thing going on... And what's with the body of Sakuras' they found? Did she up and leave her body or something, or did Sakura and Li fake a body? Er, yeah, I'm confused on that bit... Anyway! I loved it! Well, got to go... I stayed up till like, 5:39 AM so I could finish the fic! C ya!
| Reviewed By: brineykagome On: December 05, 2003 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi its me britneykagome the one you talk to on aol well i really like this story and im just reading it all again well im about to go chat bye
| Reviewed By: cece On: July 21, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woh... omg... this is great... omg... this is like the best fic i have like EVER read.... omg... whoaaaaa yeah.... omg... i need more, lol ^^ | Reviewed By: AnimeGamer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 06:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I've been reading this story since when the fourth chapter came out at fanfiction.net. It's rare to have a gift for writing, and you have it. I've never read a story so great since Mouse-san's "Dimensions". I have written a story long ago that bordered the line between a R and NC-17 rating...but it was the first story that explored using sex in CCS at the time. I dont know if you have read it, and most likely you haven't, but the inpact my story had upon everyone else is like how yours is to everyone who has read it. This story, in essence, is something I visioned two years ago after I finished writing that story. A story where it di have sexual content but even without it, it was still great to read. Simply put, it's a masterpiece, I wish that FFN didn't ban NC-17 stories because this story is one of the best CCS stories to be written. If you ever pursue writing a novel, let me--no, everyone-- know when it comes out to go buy it, as I think most of us will. Heck, this story should be featured right next to Starlight Rose's "Heart's Treasures" up on the main page. I must stop writing now, because I can go on about how good a story this is, but I dont want to take up more room then I have already. I wish you luck in your future writings and I hope to see another equally good story from you again.
-AnimeGamer | Reviewed By: NawtyDawg69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 01:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I didn't have the attention span of a rodent, I'd read more than the first paragraph. At first, I thought the plot sounded completely gay, but with all of the good reviews,I decided to read on. Great plot so far, but just not my kind of story, though I do love darkfics. | Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: December 30, 2002 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god,that was the best fan fic that i've ever reay.It would be so cool if u made a part 2 and they have a kid | Reviewed By: MikeSpencer On: December 19, 2002 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've fallen in love with your writing... it's beautiful and eloquent. You're very talented. You could use a little more figurative language (extended metaphors/similes, personification etc) to spice it up a bit but thats just my opinion. Keep up the great work :-) | Reviewed By: cat On: October 12, 2002 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Becuase it is so good Please make the next chapter. | Reviewed By: kiki On: October 04, 2002 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice, my friends recommed it i loooooooooooove vampire stories mixed with romance but could you get the other chap.(s) posted i hate waiting for the next thing,suspence kills me(not literly) | Reviewed By: Alanna and Fireheart On: June 28, 2002 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a REALLY unique story, just like its writer. I, Alanna, say. My twin bro,Fireheart, sed 2 tell u You're a superb writer. You have a really interesting way of writing things when it comes to stuff like anger, heaven, pleasure, etc. You know just what to say. I say:If I were to give you any advice, it would probably DEFINATELY be to pursue a career in writing. You've got such a COOL way of writing. HA! Fireheart says: The sex was..interesting. I say I threw up, no offense. But you have such a cool way of writing. I sed that already didn't I? Well, since you're so interested in vampires, you can always e-mail me [Alanna] about witches. We have a little experience if you need it. Kay? | Reviewed By: Shrty1016 On: June 26, 2002 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love vampire stories, especially the ones written by Anne Rice, and mixing cardcaptors in a vampire story is the best. I love your style of writing it, and can't wait for the rest of the chapters. |
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