Reviewed By: Akisoke84 On: October 02, 2007 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved this story! Your writing flows very well, and you captured everyone's personalities perfectly. Though I don't usually look for stories pertaining to this couple I really enjoyed this one. Not many people can pull off a good citrus induced scene. Yet, you wrote it beautifully. I gave it a 9 instead of a 10 because I felt there could have been more to the lemon. It could have been drawn out longer before actual intercourse making the end result a blazing inferno for Lee. Then by doing do making the actual sex more exciting and longer, since it is with Lee (who has unbelievable stamina). But, regardless I think this story was great. Your spelling and grammer were both very awesome. Which, to me means that you took time to write this and it meant something to you. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Keep up the good work!
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