| "Steamy Situations" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: O.M.G! (PLEASE READ) @.@
Reviewed By: FMPlvr11 On: June 28, 2012 05:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was truly wonderful. You captured Sousuke's and Kaname's essence perfectly! The anime is so romance deprived, plus the manga isn't even done. This fanfic definetly hit the spot! These guys are my favorite anime couple, thanks for not ruining that . . . You are super-talented, so PLEASE, write more Full Metal Panic! Sincerely, FMPlvr11 (Female Fanfic Searcher) |
Reviewed By: Catags On: August 30, 2010 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All in all, I think this is the fic I like best. Although "like" is a huge understatement. "Love" would be better ;D You have the characterization spot-on, this is a very plausible first-time, it fits so well in the continuum that I when I rewatched that episode, I could see your story slowly unfolding on screen. I love Sousuke's naive, but oh-so practical side, Kaname's abandon is very well depicted. You know, I don't like lemons that much... But this turns out to be one of my fav' FMP stories. I know you're not writing for this fandom anymore, so I'm not going to whine "write again!", I'll just say "thank you for writing this."
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Reviewed By: hauduck [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 22:45 EDT
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This was a very touching story. Thank you for sharing it!
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Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry... Forgot to Leave you a review! i Love Sergeant Dense! ALL in aLL i'd say this was a very romantic Love scene. Acting on pure instincts aLone, huh? Maybe i shouLd try that and see what happens! By the way, have tried writing a fic about Oren and Hayashimzu?
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Reviewed By: Sanna-chan On: June 19, 2008 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfull work! I found Sousuke very IC, which is quite a hard thing to accomplish. I applaud you, my friend. I hope you keep writing
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Reviewed By: Catherine On: June 19, 2008 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read a lot of romance novels over the years - hundreds if not thousands and this was HOT! Write more like it. --I do so wish Kaname & Sousuke could get together in the Anime, but alas, the fans aren't the writers (at least of the Anime). Thank God for Fan Fiction and for the Internet Search Engines to help fans find them!
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Reviewed By: arukas03 On: October 08, 2007 08:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fic was realistic without being boring, often a tough thing to achieve. The characters seemed mostly in canon, Kaname better than Sosuke. But then i think Sosuke is a hard person to write. Is he really thick and ignorant or just reserved? So anyway good job, a classy fic considering the topic. ;)
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Reviewed By: ~sami On: October 04, 2007 21:09 EDT
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Yay!! a FMP lemon! WooHoo! Thanks -- I really needed that ^_^ There are so few well-written ones out there and I thought Sousuke was *sweet* A very nice 'first time lemon'.
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Reviewed By: Langus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 23:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really liked that! Just the right amount of hentai content and it was tastefully done at that. This could actually be a believable scene as well so kudos to you for a job well done. Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Skyless_star [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 17:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good oneshot. Nicely written, the event of this story fits well with the Fumoffu episode it refers to. Sousuke's cluelessness and his acting on pure istinct are aspects that make your fic seem a natural continuation of the original serie. Very good.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 22:14 EDT
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this story makes me want to watch this show lol. i loved it!
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