| "Bulma's Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Akuryou On: March 22, 2003 21:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great fic.I was a little freaked out cause I thought Vegeta was actually going to kill Bulma,I'm so glad I was wrong.And there was a little too much detail on the birth of Trunks.But overall, great story. Good job. |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2002 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
A really nice job. The romatinc lemon was really good. Birth scenes make me squeemish and I'm a Mom (nasty flash backs I guess). But you conveyed a good emotional tension throughout the whole story. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2002 15:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwww, cute ending for chapter two. Great fic in fact!! ^^
Is there going to be more chapter??? ^^ |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate On: June 26, 2002 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great fic! It's better if you have the experience to write about it. You can give a more realistic perspective. But aside from the birth your fic was really enjoyable. If you could continue with this or make a sequel that'd be great. I like the way you write Vegeta and it would be cool to read more; maybe about how Vegeta acts as a father *hint, hint* *giggles* What I'm trying to say is please write more! Even though, it's been done, it's good to read what other authors have in mind.
Keep up the great work. Ja! |
