| "If I Was Her" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Killer_Muraki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
AHHH! I was getting into it and now I'm dying to know how it ends! You can't just leave me hanging this way!! It isn't fair! Please finish! Soon.
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Reviewed By: loritakitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 17:33 CST
Comment/Review:
"...slowly Hatori stood and walked over to the... door not even looking back at Akito..." hates Hatori Akito or is only shocked? poor Akito!
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Reviewed By: loritakitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 10:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"he moved that hand to his chest... nipples which were standing at attention and burning red like the petals of a rose" hot,but poetic! I like it.
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