Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 08:31 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey! Well done on this story. It was cute, it had a nice beginning middle and end, the plot was good. There were a couple of grammatical issues (not that I'm one to talk about grammar haha). I loved the ending, Jou's last line made me grin. Overall, it was awesome. Great job! - Love, Anubis!
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