Title: Three words Reviewed By: vegitoth [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2005 09:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: dramatic,angsty,and romantic. That's pretty much it. You did especially well in the dramatic because while reading this I never expected that Relena would cry, then Heero would be there to comfort her. And I like the way you kept Heero in character yet for the fact that he also wanted to see her. I hope you get out of your writers block.
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