| "Ramen Flavored Kagome" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mikomi Usa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2009 01:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...very good job!! I love it!! XD maybe you should give me some tips...? Please? *puppy eyes that kicks Inuyasha's any day (lol as if!)* oh! And about ur review on my story...yes you're right the mark is significant. And the spell is suposed to mess with his memory so that he can't remember anything about her clearly lol. And thanks so much for the great review!! ^_^ *huggles* and keep on writing! You're really really good!! XD
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 20:01 CST
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... I think the hanyou's cracking. *muffles laughter* You have a tri-war going on in one character! Sparkly Faerie is right, usually its just the demon side thats the problem. I like your twist- original. Plus, humans tend to screw up their on minds, so it fits. Hmm... was it intentinal that his youkai reminds me of Sesshomaru? Great start. May your muse be prosperous! Huzzah! *throws pillow into the air*
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Reviewed By: Sparkly Faerie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 18:53 CST
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*giggle* I like the ending. The 'separate personalities' thing reminds me of 'Facets of the Living Jewel', except its sad that both sides hate him. But the threat against his human side was funny. I enjoyed it. Onto the favourites list with this.
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 19:12 CDT
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Good story. I have to admit, I loved the comment about threatening Ningen InuYasha with lots of cuts to be treated by bactine! But I like the premise, too, about how Ningen InuYasha is the part of him dragging his feet. But what a sexy eating scene....
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this one shot, or as you say a chapter. I do hope you post the rest of it. I did quite enjoy it. Until next time, Chanda
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I hope you can at least get the first part of the fic all together because I want read it! That nightmare scene was rather... brutal. Of course I would expect nothing less from the nightmare of a half demon. I'm almost surprised that he didn't thank her for waking him... almost.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 14:44 CDT
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Interesting. Don't think I've ever read a fic where his human side was against him. This should be good, looking forward to more!
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