| "Yours Eternally" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: the one they call ADAM On: January 12, 2008 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa... That's a powerful story. Quick, lots of brief explainations, but powerful. I absolutely loved the ending paragraph. I felt the most intense line in there was "Aiden's entire world had died with Amaya"... I LOVE it.
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Title: sniff
Reviewed By: XIFallenxAngelIX [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really sad... I wanna hug him... and get him a kitten... and five kids... seriously.. though.. that was really good, the entire time you were reading it you knew something terrible was gonna happen to her, but the part where they were together kinda perked it up until you realized she was really gonna die.. having the flashback during the funeral was pretty cool. Very nice, worth the 10 out of 10 rating.
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Reviewed By: jesie On: October 14, 2007 05:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i understand it's fast pace because it's a one-shot. It's pretty good. Keep it up.
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