| "not just what I seem" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Sica_Belle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 02:05 CDT
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To be honest I've read and heard worse grammar from people who have English as a first language. It's a great story so far, a little bit of polishing up and I think this would be a truly wonderful fic, I would absolutely Love for you to continue. I have read a couple of your other works, but I have noticed you haven't updated in a good while. Don't make me beg...... OK I am begging, Please, Please, Please, continue. I really want to see what happens next. BTW how many reviews were you wanting before a new chapter gets posted. I think, for you, I might become a regular reviewer just to be able to see what happens next. Also, I am going to put this down as one of my fav fics.
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Reviewed By: ??? On: December 22, 2007 08:42 CST
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hi i think your story so far is good. how you write the sentences is very good,too.(cause you aren´t bored to death...) BUT you defenetly need a beta reader or something! Because you often switch from past to present and your grammar...it´s bad. it really gets on my nerve -.- (example: "Yes this man really afraid the young heir of the south." It schould be either:"Yes this man really frightened/scared the young heir of the south." or: "Yes the young heir of the south was really afraid/scared of this man." but if you corrected those mistakes your story wuold be easier and more fun to read. except for the mistakes your story is great (so far^^).
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2007 04:36 CST
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Good story also and it would be kind of neat if this ended up being a Inutaisho/Kagome story hehehe. There aren't many of those. I enjoyed the fact how he rescued her from the woods and is going all out to protect her. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 10:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was good...just what i expected from the all mighty 'sweetest angel' can't wait fore you to continue...^_^
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 13:23 CST
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that was really really good can't wait fore the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: kornychic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 02:21 CDT
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I really like the idea of your story! I want you to continue it, so that I can read more chapters :) CHEERS
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