| "Sin or Spend the Night All Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: twisted.... or is it so?
Reviewed By: Ki de Lioncourt(not signed in) On: May 14, 2009 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, well. You don't come across many pieces as hardcore as this these days. Even those who do deem themselves "rough" don't grasp at the taboo like this. Yes, this was exceptionally enjoyable. Mello crying toward the end, but still being cold and uncaring to Matt was a good move. While you depict him as twisted and uncaring, this shows him to need someone else to some extent besides a quicki. Though returning to his past state of chilled and uncompassionate tells you that such impulses are somrthing he cannot live on. I certainly will look for more pieces that you've done. I only hope they hold up to the quality of this fic. Thank you very much, ~Ki de Lioncourt
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Reviewed By: Chrys On: April 30, 2009 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't leave it! I love fics like this!! I REALLY want to know what happens!
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Title: Mello =
Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2008 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it but whens the next chapter coming out?
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Title: o.
Reviewed By: slashy On: August 04, 2008 04:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You seem a very twisted individual if I do say so myself...But all the same, I will read what comes next if you will still care to write more.
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Reviewed By: BAH-B On: July 26, 2008 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, soon. Is so good.
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Reviewed By: Mysc_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2008 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU! YOU! YES, YOU! WRITE MOAR! i demand youuuuu, because i RP AND Cosplay as MELLO! so, basically MELLO SAYS WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Gazer95 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been FOREVER!!! When's the next chapter gonna come out?
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Reviewed By: Ce On: November 29, 2007 15:41 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story. Please update again soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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