Reviewed By: andrew baird On: May 28, 2009 15:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: this was quite interesting. the second chapter is considerably better than the first, though as you state in your notes it is mainly to set the ball rolling. i know this is almost certainly discontinued seeing the amount of time without an update, but i wouldnt have minded seeing the other 8 chapters.
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