| "Birthright" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: texy On: November 10, 2007 16:29 CST
Comment/Review:
so good so intense! can't wait for new chapters!
|
Reviewed By: Em On: October 17, 2007 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More please!
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 01:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice update... glad that kagome is sticking around this time and not running away... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 23:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was sweet. he assumed that she wouldn't want him, he assumed she would be fearful and unwilling, he assumed his youkai transformation would take over. he never figured that she would want him, that she would never fear any part of him, that she could always calm his youki... his fear and trepidation was almost palpable, his dreams were portrayed realistically. ~ thank you, ginny
|
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
quite exciting... boy is still in denial but she seems to be willing to take any closeness from him. she loves him and will do anything to ease his pain. i like sesshoumaru's almost willingness to help. . . i will anticipate future installments. ~ thank you, ginny
|
Reviewed By: musicmuse18 On: October 09, 2007 18:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good first chapter. Can't wait to read more
|
Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... really like it so far... wonder what solution will sesshomaru come up with... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
|
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 10:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the updates. This is really interesting and I feel very original. Keep up the good work.
|
Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 04:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
You got a good start to a longer stpry here, I'll be looking forward to seeing how it turns out.
|
Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2007 03:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gonna be a great story, I can tell! Love how K refuses to leave him, always trying to help. And how he always tries to protect her, even from himself.
|
Reviewed By: Sukiko On: October 08, 2007 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! It shocked me a lot though.. very interesting ;D Can't wait till the next chapter! ^-^
|
