| "Dazzling" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Tyler Snow On: August 09, 2014 13:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic :) Just the fact that you wrote about one of my OTP's
- Tasuki and Tamahome - makes it 100x times better :D & I never
really liked AU fics but yours got me falling in love
⤠So, could you please update it?? :)
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Reviewed By: anil495 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2011 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I noticed some spelling mistakes but other than that I loved this fic. Tasuki's symbol is on his arm and not his shoulder but I'll just chalk that up to the AU part of the story. I hope to see more to this fic in the future. |
Reviewed By: Divanora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 10:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this, I can't believe I'm only the second reviewer! I don't suppose there's any chance this will be finished up?
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Reviewed By: yeahjesse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 02:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Does this not have any reviews? Again, a captivating tale. I don't know how you do it. I really want to see Tamahome's reaction to Tasuki's tattoo and see where else you're going with this story. I like how innocent Tamahome is here. Your writing flows well and there are few mistakes--mostly words that a spell check wouldn't pick up because although they're typos, they're technically other words spelled correctly (ie. relived vs relieved). I also like the level of description you've put into this. I hope you have plans to update!
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