Reviewed By:kandyapple08 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 16:20 CST Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: like it but it need more jokes. and isn't inuyasha stubborn and rude? and besides what's with the whole kahaku stuff?! or whatever his name is!
Reviewed By: Tayda88 On: November 08, 2007 06:14 CST Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: It's a good story and All I just Rin Wouldn't Give In so easily,Maybe have her put Up more of a fight.Sesshomaru says he's gonna spank her have her tell him to go lik fuck himself Ya Know!! But good story thusfar