| "The Hidden Strength Within" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2009 16:07 CDT
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I can't wait for the new story to begin i am so very curious as to all that has gone on.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 10:36 CST
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you know. you could almost end it here. an epilogue telling the readers where the hell the missing couple went in short form and an update on Kagome's happiness and if you wanted, the story could be considered complete. But that's my opinion. a New villain huh? I'm looking forward to seeing what you have for us. Keep writing. DD
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2008 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can you please continue with this story. I don't care how you choose to. I really love it and find it intriguing. smiles
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 15:09 CST
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frankly I think that this story is almost done. breaking it up into "books" would make it easier to read and comprehend (IMHO). It would also give you a stopping point to take a breather if you need to.
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2008 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i definately think that you should finish this story and then start the sequel.....but still finish the other story since i havent seen it updated in a while.....yay thanks for updating i am really excited to see how this turns out
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Title: ...really?
Reviewed By: Little Red On: October 19, 2008 16:23 CDT
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i've been circling around your fic for about a month now… the name is interesting… and i'd like to read it… but the summary makes me skip it every time... "There is a family secret that Kagome doesn't know about her family"… really? change that one thing for me. get rid of the last family in that sentence… then I can read it… until then i'll just keep on looking at it and i'll keep on skipping it…
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 23:09 CDT
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hehe. I like the chapter. I think I see what Seshoumaru is doing, and I hope he doesn't take it too far. As for Kagome, Who could blame her for her actions. There were appropriate in one sense. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. DD
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 12:10 CDT
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poor kagome
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 08:17 CDT
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loved this chapter as well as I did the rest...it is very good writting hope to read more..take your time though
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 05:33 CDT
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can't wait to read more of this story it is getting better by the secod
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: August 20, 2008 23:12 CDT
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NOOOO!!!!!!!! you can't leave such a cliff hanger like that. You evil evil woman. Loved the update and I read through you authors note/apology fully I agree about the using words like can't and can not for more emphasis and my thoughts and sentences get interrupted very often and many times do to a random thought that occured to me while i was thinking or talking on an almost daily basis. I don't think you should have had to apologize for it but you felt the need too and honestly don't think you needed to justify your style of writing. I find it highly enjoyable and errors will occur for everyone nothing and no one is perfect. I love your story the way it is and your writing style. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 04:31 CDT
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hi pandora, i really like this fic but have noticed that there are some words missing. usually they're missing when there should be the name of a place such as in sess's flashback of kags mom she says i'm from and it skips the country. this has happened in more than one chapter and it's not always the name of a place.
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Reviewed By: nightshade41230 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2008 03:32 CDT
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I caan't wait to read more.this story is very good and hope sess/kags can make a come back ,maybe you can make a small sequel or something..
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 20:59 CDT
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omfg please update soon. it would be funny if kagome difeated naraku before sessy-sama got there and she was walking out the door when he got there lol. but don't mind me im the crazy girl in the corner..... -hugs knees and rocks in a corner- la la la la la
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2008 13:38 CDT
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Something seems to be messed up in the formatting of the newest chapter because words seem to be missing, the 1st word in the chapter is sat & a few lines down a sentence begins with almost. So something is goofed so that the front of some sentences is chopped off.
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