Title: Hi, there!
Reviewed By: Gallantmon of the Hazard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 07:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, it's me! I'm sorry that I didn't review earlier, but I've read your story and it is pretty good. But I think that your spelling and grammar need some work and it isn't too hard, however, I'm not sure of the plot, too much. But it is your first story, it is pretty good, and you should work with it. Finally, I would like to say that I'm interested in your 'crystal' ideas that you sent in that e-mail and two, can I ask you a favor? Well, I wish to use the idea of Sailor Eternity in a sequel story for my 'Twilight Wars' story. Plus, can I use it for 'Darkness Moon' too? Later and best wishes!
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