"Sins of an Uncontrollabe Love" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: sakuya tsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 19:24 CDT Comment/Review: So UNFAITHFUL! I thought it was about Bulma and Vegeta. Tears~! I like the jealousy, but I rather have Vegeta getting jealous for real than just in a dream; and another man(such a third~ie!) acting all whinny to Bulma about it makes me want to hit that guy. I don't care kuz me no know his name, and is so not important! This is like a companion piece, so it must be a one-shot, or will you continue this? X____X~!
| Reviewed By: AnoVonA On: October 30, 2007 03:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey there ! I really like the beginning of this new fanfic and I hope you'll update soon. I enjoyed it so much I'm going to read your other story as well...
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