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| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] | | Pages (86): [ « ‹ 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 › » ] | Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 04:19 PDT
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*expletive deleted* THURMAN *expletive deleted* HIS OWN CHILD, I *expletive deleted* HIS *expletive deleted* THURMAN *expletive deleted*, AND AS FOR *expletive deleted* CABOT... I fully love that poor little girl, BTW. I hope Kurt and Sami take her in.
| Reviewed By: kittycatkitten [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 20:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Kurt how much more can he handle, I hope he takes the girl to Sam!
| Reviewed By: puresunlight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 20:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you portray every nuance of Samantha and Kurt's characters. I can see their strengths and their weaknesses combining into real, believable personalities. Good work! I do have a small question though....how does Kurt know what phone numbers to call to reach Samantha's family?
| Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 17:41 PDT
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wonderful chapters! please update soon!
| Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 16:19 PDT
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Aw shit Belle and Kich have lost their minds. And Kurts just digging himself a pretty little grave. Poor man, poor parents. Great story Sue, really it's amazing!
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 15:27 PDT
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I'm glad someone told Kurt that Sami was safe. I just wish he'd hurry back to her, if he will! I take it that the child is human? Or is she hanyou like her mother? And what mix was her mother?
| Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg sueric! youve really outdone yourself with this fanfic..this chapter especially! its sooooo goodXD so full or angst and anticipation and sadness and...omg! i cant wait for the next chapter...Purity 8 is by far one of your best so far!!! its one of my favsXD not that all your fics arnt my favs too...but this is just soooooo goodXD i feel so sorry for the little girl youkai and her mother...the father is such an ***....augh...i hope kurt helps her out...you know i can see him ending u pcalling bas or something and asking them to come pick up the little girl...or he ends up taking her along with him...and the sammy and him adopt her!!! lolXD imagination running wild...i really hope you dont plan on ending this fic anytime soon..its just too good to endXD i love it=D good work=D and happy writing=D thx for the two chapters this time=D
| Reviewed By: bert8813 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 13:37 PDT
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I cant wait to see what happens with the doctors in cali! how could a father kill the mother of his child and use the child as a test subject?! what's going to happen to that little girl? what kind of hanyou is she? cant wait for another update.
| Title: Chapter 58: Good GAWD!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ever feel like you were gonna cry? Like you KNEW it was coming, right on the edge of your consciousness, but wouldn't come to fruition? I was borderline BLUBBER and somehow got it together. I thought of my neice and how I'd feel if she was treated that way, had been through such a traumatic beginning and was still being treated like less than spit. It gave me such a feeling of revulsion, I changed my mind about eating lunch. I LITERALLY don't think I can stomach anything right now. I mean, this goes beyond a ONS or even a deadbeat dad--TEST SUBJECT? Oh, HELL no! I think of Kelvin, of Thurman, and that (pardon my Portugeuse) FUCKING COWARD Calbot and wanted to just take the PC I was reading off of and toss the mother fucker! I have witnessed some of the saddest, most vile, ridiculous child abuse, neglect and abandonment you could ever imagine but THAT, that chapter and all the drama in it, it was just too much! My heart cried "How COULD you!" and I just wanted to call BCW on every trifling parent I knew in divine retribution...but, the kids... Anyway, on to the review; had to get that out, sorry. I am already in love with the little hanyou girl and I can easilly see a bond growing with the two as they make a road trip to wherever Kurt initially deems best to take her. I see cleansing and coming to terms and nightmares anew but old ones fading, of a man truly BECOMING a man, to himself and for himself in a way he'd never think to be--because all his life used to be about vengence, with no other goal or dream. To have a family, to be TRULLY loved, cherished, needed, treasured...will do so much for him. I hope he adopts the little one. But, I'm getting WAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYY ahead of myself. I many ways, I want those doctors in some way to pay, to be destroyed scientifically, to be ostracized from the community in every way, to feel true fear and terror and paranoia and uncertainty every day of their lives. Then, I take a breath and think. The ONLY thing keeping a lid on all those emotions and those rather morbid thoughts is the FAMILIES that some of those monsters may have and the CHILDREN that may be affected. That's the ONLY thing keeping me from railing with Kich and Belle for blood and consistentantly chanting it darkly. I just want this over. Leave the youkai and hanyous alone. Let the hunters do thier jobs and get the hell out of the way. OMG, this story's getting me riled..but, still, I LOVE it! Keep it coming, Sue! Well, Thursday, I guess. OMG, just REMEMBERING Belle watching those files, I shudder. For a mother to see such a thing. God, she's stronger than I EVER gave her credit. Not that I ever thought she was weak but, if it were me, I think i'd instantly upchuck and zap out. Okay, going to get me a cup oc chamomile or something...decaf...and a teddy bear or a hug or something. yeah.
| Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 13:10 PDT
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O.o A child...?
| Title: ***Heart Ache***
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 12:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know... I named this review "Heart Ache", but it was simply because that's exactly how I felt. After a few weeks in the hospital and a nasty emergency surgery, I come back to catch up with the story and my heart just felt so heavy!! +++***+++ Sam's suffering and Kurt's memories, his guilt, his desire to correct everything that is wrong...The purgatory that he has exiled himself to, and the way his soul cries for atonement while at the same time his memories of Sam give him the constant drive to continue in the path of suffering and pain just made me feel like whining like a wounded puppy! +++***+++ If Sam's nightmare was to become real, even if just in part, it would be heartbreaking!! Kurt has dealt with so much guilt and pain throughout his life, and added to that the pain of having met Sam and finally realizing that everything he ever believed was wrong, knowing that Sam suffered so much because he didn't know better and then to suffer again it would just seem so cruel!! +++***+++ I must admit, in the beginning, I HATED Kurt, I really did. But as we got to know him better and as he began to show his true self, I began to understand him and feel that he had his motives (albeit wrong at the time) for making the mistakes he made. +++***+++ Now faced with the little girl, I feel that this is yet another opportunity for him to expiate some of the sins committed in the past. (How much more does he have to endure before he finally redeems himself?) +++***+++ Then there's Sam, I know she is hurting more than meets the eye. After all, she is the one that suffered all those horrors at the hands of the monsters in the lab. Why is she keeping herself so together?, is there a volcano of emotional pain waiting to explode under the surface?, or is she really that strong and even stronger than all her family members to avoid the feelings of revenge that seem to plague the family? +++***+++ Will she have to endure even more pain when the truth is finally out about who Kurt is and face the rage of everyone around her? +++***+++ Last, but not least, is the feeling that I will have to suffer a day without an update!!! ***Whines Pitifully*** WHY??, Oh Why??? Where are the good old days when my favorite writer would have mercy on our souls and gift us with more episodes?? (Notice the dramatic flair)+++***+++ Why must we gnaw our nails waiting like Sam did in that cage until a new update is here? I suffer, and I do not wish to blame it on my all time favorite writer, but I will say that if we were to have a Super-duper-extra-plus-long chapter, or just a few average ones tossed as mercy to us the readers, my heart (and my recovery) would just be much easier to deal with!! (Notice the pathetic attempt to guilt the writer into giving us a bit more chapters or update more frequently). +++***+++ All I can say is that you are blessed with a gift, and your writing is amazing, your imagination is beyond compliments, and I enjoy every word you have written up to this day!! You have managed to make me feel joy, happiness, sadness, pain, anguish, rage and every possible emotion known to humans just by reading your stories!!! Thank you for giving so much of yourself to us!! +++***+++ With love and admiration: Midcat.
| Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 12:09 PDT
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Sad and anger are my feelings on the last chapter. But hey.....Kurt's got a baby now. Please let him adopt the baby and give her a pretty name. Maybe by the next chapter I can quit sobbing. Maybe. Maybe.
| Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 12:02 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! KILL HIM KURT! (HISSS) And I thought the other guys were bad, Kurt needs to get that girl out of there. Thanks Sue, another great chapter
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 11:59 PDT
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Vindetta is becoming quite accurate in this story, against all of those corrupt researchers. Kurt can't leave the child behind. I hope that he takes it to Sam and the family, and hopefully he stays then. Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: dusparr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think i see purity 10...
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