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| "Purity 8: Vendetta" Reviews/Comments [ 1284 ] | | Pages (86): [ « ‹ 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 › » ] | Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 10:21 PDT
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Great chapter!! Update soon please and keep jup the excellent work!! ^_^
| Title: Chapter 56: Oh, shit!
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 10:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ayo, Sam slugged Belle! Cain yelled at Gin! Morio stole a flower--okay, that's the usuals... Okay, yeah it was a mistake with Sam, I know, but... **gapes in shock** This chapter touched on just about everything I've come to love about your fics--comedy, drama, angst, and the "I miss my boo/don't even realize or WANNA realize that fact" aspect. Yet, the formula, true to plot, never gets old and stodgy! Ah, refreshing! Can't WAIT till they talk again. **hinhintnudgenudge** Okay, I'll be patient...AMAP. Great chappie and, am I weird for laughing at Sami getting dog-piled by her sisters? I thought it was sweet but I fet her pain, too.
| Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 09:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Poor Sami she finally remembered about the phone. I hope Kurt calls soon. The Cain and Gin thing almost made me cry. And poor Kurt are his nightmares ever going to stop.
| Title: Chapter 55: siiiiiigh...
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 08:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It seems the mate bond is growing more in-depth and Kurt misses his 'little demon'. Have I told you lately how much I love MIKIO? Aw, I loved that convo with him and Sami...that was so sweet! The way they can feel and see each other is so like warm honey in my belly...yeah, a definite I-want-a-boyfriend moment. LOL! But, oh shit, Kurt now sees his blunder and, whoa, Nellie with those angst-ridden thoughts, homeboy--Sam's got your back! Yeah, I'm weird... Anywho, great chapter and, YES, I DID thoroughly enjoy the last minute scare on Peterson. He really DID get him where it hurt, didn't he? LOL!
| Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 07:40 PDT
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Wow...that was pretty intense. But I don't understand; where is the cell phone? Is it because of the bag switch with Kurt? I guess it would be considering he has what was supposed to be Sam's bag...And he's going to all the facilities to destroy them? Geez Kurt, take a break and go visit your mate why don't ya? Lol. Seriously, great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
| Reviewed By: AtamaHitoride [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 07:18 PDT
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Loved it! But then again I always do.
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 07:03 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate that Kurt is going farther and farther away from her. How are they going to find each other. She doesn't know where he was going, and all he knows is that she's somewhere in Maine. And now, she's remembered the cell phone, but the bags got switched. I wonder if Sam will insist on seeing the tapes.
| Reviewed By: darkangel05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 18:48 PDT
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So Kurt accidentally switched the fannypacks? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OMG, the things that can happen now that the Inu clan have a lot more to go on. Awesome chapter Sue and cant wait for the next one to come out!
| Reviewed By: Sesshomaru4Kagura4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 06:12 PDT
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OMG! I'm back... and there's SOOOOOO many chappies! Love Kurt's version of "torture the white coats", loved Sam's family reunion, loved Kurt's missing her, LOVED the "pantsing" scene. I haven't laughed like that in regards to the story... well, ever, I think. I wonder if Sam looks like Sango on her human night? Because there is seriously NO WAY that Kurt ISN'T some kinda Miroku reincarnation...
| Reviewed By: Dark Inu Fan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 20:52 PDT
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It took him that long to find out that he had Sam's stuff, that's why she wasn't able to call him! Maybe he can just give in and use her phone to call her family. She doesn't have any numbers on save in that, but there's the calls recieved list that would be helpful... unless she deleted them also when she hung up. Kurt really reminds me of Miroku at times. I guess all of the origonals have to be reincarnated some time if they didn't last this long in the first place. Keep up the good work, dark
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 17:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know If I want any happy chapters for this story because that means that its going to be over soon...
| Reviewed By: malitiadixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 17:48 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew there was a reason she hadn't called yet. I just didn't realize that he had put the cards in his own bag. So, they'll see him on the tapes and come looking for him. I doubt that. I would venture a guess that they'll find the facility, and that Harlan will give them a little insite as to what Kurt had done to them, worm that he is. Then they might put two and two together...well, just a theory. Well, I'm off to check out the sneak peek. Thanks for the Saturday chapter!
| Reviewed By: DonthatemecuzImbeautiful [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 16:22 PDT
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Excellent chapter. I'm really hoping that Kurt;s suspicions that they'll come after him are correct. After all, if they catch up to him then they'll automatically know he's Sami's mate and she can see him again! GAH! I really want her to have him all to herself now. The suspense is killing me!!! Ah, well. Thanks for the Saturday chapter, it perked up my weekend :)
| Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 11:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG ponytail and gold earrings! Loved this chapter even if I almost cried through about half of it! Thank you Sue.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 10:59 PDT
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I knew that Kurt had grabbed the wrong bag when Belle had picked up the data cards! Oh man, poor Kurt! I hope him and Sami get some peace soon!
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